One More Sonnet

Tag: sonnet

  • This date

    This date

    Is every day the same day
    As seen through different eyes?
    Is it my awakening, say,
    That shuffles then identifies?
    What’s the likelihood of this date
    Becoming itself discrete?
    Tumbling through the keeper’s gate
    On its way to complete:
    Re-assigned
    Re-vamped
    Re-aligned
    Re-stamped.
    . Different in name – but familiar,
    . If not the same – at least similar.

    19 October 2010

    To the reader: Ponderous thoughts demand no answer! They’re posed as playful, quizzical, metaphysical; far from pointless but vaguely meaningful. How different is one day from the next and does that difference mean much in the bigger scheme of things? Courtesy of a rotating planet, and our fixed location, diurnal patterns turn us on and off. Locally, we share the same day but globally we create billions of variations on that theme. Humanity has no day … humans do.

    To the poet: Three questions tumble to the page with the dynamics of dice; tossed and skittled. The order doesn’t matter. The shape and structure of poetry can be used to reinforce its message. In this case the theme is ‘familiar but similar’ (almost but not quite the same). And so, the last stanza does just that; plays with slight variation. When does a hyphen become a dash?

     

    this date this date

     

  • Parallel Dimension

    Parallel Dimension

    At the same time being and becoming,
    Letting go of now,
    It’s the whistle while you’re humming,
    With the puzzlement of how.
    To be the parent of tomorrow,
    And the child of today,
    With the sentiment of sorrow,
    That promises to stay.
    To be oneself and find contentment,
    But to know it won’t endure,
    To struggle with resentment,
    You’re safe but not secure.
    . In a parallel dimension do we still exist?
    . Do archived remnants of ourselves persist?

    © Tim Grace, 10 October 2010

    To the reader: The multi-layered dimensions of life are not neatly stacked into rows nor columns. In a physical sense most of what we did yesterday is irretrievably gone. Likewise, tomorrow’s organization is as much fantasy as it is fact. And so today becomes the main arena, the fleeting zone of action and influence. By necessity then, much of what is done is overlapped with conflicting pressures and contrasting roles; all at once occurring.

    To the poet: The subject of this sonnet is the conundrum. The persistent puzzle of being and becoming all at once. The challenge of writing a convincing argument about puzzlement is to end it still in wonder; and so the last two lines are questions. In this sonnet the rhyming structure (ABAB) could be split into two halves (AABB) and almost keep its sense of narrative.

     

    parallel dimension
    parallel dimension

     

  • Commodified

    Commodified

    You have been commodified,
    Digitized of sorts,
    Cleverly identified,
    As a string of ones and naughts.
    You have been commercialized,
    Packaged up as stock,
    Uniformly standardized,
    So your pieces interlock.
    You have been configured,
    Codified and mapped,
    Carefully considered,
    As potential to adapt.
    . You are the generation, named without a name,
    . Be you X or Y, we have made you all the same!

    © Tim Grace, 27 September 2010

    To the reader: The younger generations, we have crafted them as different; for that has served our purpose. From early childhood they have been primed for the marketplace and now they pay the price; they have been commodified. The nameless generations of X and Y have been so individualized that they are powerless to act in concert as a collective independent agent. They resort to social media for voice but that itself is a construction of those who would strip them of identity.

    To the poet: The globalized economy has impacted on how we express the human condition. Life has become digitized, commercialized, and standardized; commodified, identified, and codified. As we describe ourselves we are likely to live. The use of ‘you’ as a distinctive label helps in the creation of distance and separation. From the narrator’s perspective the deal has been done; the package has been sold.

     

    commodified commodified

     

  • Simple Solutions

    Simple Solutions

    Nature finds its habitat,
    Where best it finds a fit,
    Accommodates to this and that,
    So together it is knit …
    To the ever changing circumstance,
    To the ravages of time,
    To the vagaries of happenstance,
    That slump as well as climb.
    Nature seeks not certainty,
    Nor acts too far ahead,
    It covets not eternity,
    So accepts its daily bread.
    . Nature is the consequence of patterns in repeat
    . Simple solutions … flexible and neat.

    © Tim Grace, 10 October 2010

    To the reader: The more we marvel at the complexity of life the more we understand its simplicity… simplexity. So many of our great writers, artists, scientists and philosophers have spent their lives reducing their vast intellects into small acts of perfect beauty. In their own way reinterpreting nature; unravelling and revealing its simple patterns. While praising the reductionists it’s nature that deserves the greatest accolade for it is endlessly holistic, forever adaptive and constantly creative.

    To the poet: This is a neat and simple sonnet. The pattern of three four-line stanzas is perfect for an arrival at a concluding couplet. This sonnet being a statement of sorts is emphasized in the ‘so that’ structure of the first and third stanzas. The middle stanza adds content and context to the statement. As summary, it was important the final couple was expressed as a ‘simple solution’.

     

    simple solutions simple solutions

     

  • Saw Myself

    Saw Myself

    Walked by a window, saw myself in that,
    Indiana Jones takes a morning stroll,
    Arranged to meet my wife, I have her hat,
    So there’s time to fill; the poets on patrol.
    Over the bridge there’s a flower show,
    The annual collision of colours has started,
    Met a friend on the way, said “hullo”
    Introduced him to my wife’s hat, then we parted.
    Flowers versus people, seems like even odds,
    Sister says to Alex “stop running”
    Totally bemused he stops…
    She starts … that’s cunning!
    . Indiana Jones and the blooming mess,
    . What for … it’s anybody’s guess!

    © Tim Grace, 13 August 2010

    To the reader: Impressions by nature have a lasting effect. The look of myself reflected in a shopfront window was what caught my eye; there at my side was Indiana Jones. Together, as described by the shape of our shared hat, we were on our way to a flower show to solve a blooming mess. For the intrepid visitor, a flower show offers much in the way of spontaneous visual content; none better than the antics of siblings at play … a colorful display indeed!

    To the poet: This poem is sketched out of three moments that quickly unravelled into a sequence of novel events. With twenty minutes to spare, I sat at a picnic table sandwiched between two families and began to write. The hat, the friend, the missing person, the children in dispute all assembled into this playful poem. True to the notion of a sketch, a poem like this has to be of the moment; I had to freeze and divorce myself from the action to capture its spontaneity.

     

    saw myself saw myself

     

     

     

  • At the Same Time

    At the Same Time

    At the same time being and becoming,
    Letting go of now,
    It’s the whistle while you’re humming,
    With the puzzlement of how.
    To be the parent of tomorrow,
    And the child of today,
    With the sentiment of sorrow,
    That promises to stay.
    To be oneself and find contentment,
    But to know it won’t endure,
    To struggle with resentment,
    To be safe but not secure.
    . In a parallel dimension do we still exist?
    . Do archived remnants of ourselves persist?

    © Tim Grace, 10 October 2010

    To the reader: Being in the now is a temporary state of presence. A non-permanent proposition that fleetingly describes all that is at a single point of time. Now is nothing more than a bridge that spans all things separated by the passage of two moments. Confusion of now as a permanent state renders the past obsolete, and casts the future as a thief; through now we nurse resentment.

    To the poet: The philosophical sonnet is a good time filler. Pick a topic and ponder. In this poem thoughts, almost statements, about past, present and future unfold in couplets. The poem concludes obtusely at a final couplet containing two questions. Writing a pointless poem finds its justification in playfulness; as a creative piece of text it has an interesting shape and form; the rhymes are enjoyable and the theme is universal.

     

    at the same time at the same time