What to make of those with humourless wit,
of those who frown, those who grumble and growl;
of those who bemoan joy; awkwardly sit
upon a light-hearted jest with a scowl?
What to make of those who by nature rile
against the frivolous; heavily mark
the wistful as trite and in sombre style
dismiss the chortle as an errant lark?
What to make of those with dark demeanour,
those who do nothing but darken the sky,
casting shadows on polished patina;
those who take a dim view of all they spy?
. These are they who chain good-fun to a cage,
. and for laughter’s sake, will a smirk engage.
© Tim Grace, 17 March 2013
To the reader: Some adults unlearn everything they once knew about fun and laughter; they become morose and sullen. No doubt they have good-reason for such stern reproach of light-hearted follies. Chronic absence of a smile response robs these grumpy souls of the happiness surge delivered by endorphins and triggered by something as simple as a genuine smile. The health benefits of smiling are impressive; so too the social impact of this friendly gesture.
To the poet: We can take the pursuit of happiness too seriously; drain it of fun and become disheartened. Writing a sonnet can suffer the same chain of events. In its original form this sonnet had an unintelligible middle stanza that was lost in its own search for meaning. The ‘editorial rescue’ ripped out the guts and inserted a verse. The final structure of three verses and a chorus brings me no great joy!
4 thoughts on “Those Who Frown”
This time, my favorite: “those who do nothing but darken the sky,
casting shadows on polished patina;” because I can touch it. 🙂
Hi Cai… as you got me thinking about your favourite line, I seek your pemission to nudge it slightly? To work a little better with ‘patina’ it might be better that those with such demeanor tarnish rather than ‘darken’ the sky. What do you think? Tim
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No, Tim. I like the original “darken” better. 🙂
Once a poem is published it becomes public property… you win.