One More Sonnet

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  • Strides Into Steps

    Strides Into Steps

    Once upon a time I presume he danced,
    for there was rhythm in his shuffling gait.
    I suppose there was a time when he chanced
    to skip the pavement, to jump the fence, skate
    upon thin ice; I presume this was so.
    I suppose that once upon a time he
    could run like the wind and swivel on snow.
    May be once, this was how he used to be?
    How he used to be, before age took hold
    and shortened his strides into steps; weathered
    then withered his reach; proceeded to fold
    him into segments… with all parts severed.
    . In this man there are vestiges of truth.
    . Hidden in his shuffle is this man’s youth.

    © Tim Grace, 1 April 2012

    To the reader: The shuffle of elderly folk is rooted in the tentative first steps of childhood. Without momentum the ageing-frame hasn’t the balance to sustain a full-stride between steps; it’s lost the confidence to fall forward. In our prime the ability to walk is translated into the rhythm of life; through dance we skip; through sport we skate; as through time we scurry. Without stretch, and  pace to match, we compensate … we walk with two feet not one, we shuffle.

    To the poet: The strong structure of this sonnet descends into an awkward shuffle. It begins with stride and then falters. Beyond the first stanza, short-repeats struggle to complete a full line. Temporary anchors are scattered throughout. Stop-start phrases need backward attention. Through heavy compensation the sonnet’s rhythm is lost. In poetry, physical structure is as much a tool as any other literary technique; a poem is built as much as it is written.

     

    steps into strides steps into strides

     

  • Angling

    Angling

    All I did was drop a line, nothing more
    than simply give you cause to contemplate.
    It was not my chin that dropped, not my jaw
    that took umbrage; not me who bit the bait.
    You could have let it go, let it dangle.
    Instead, you gave it a tug, you tested
    the line; turned what was slack into tangle.
    It was you who floundered, then protested.
    Nonetheless, you did nothing to resist
    it’s ascorbic tang; and so, there you hang,
    dangling from a string of words, a long list
    of ponderings that promulgated pang.
    . What lures fish from the safety of rocks?
    . It’s the slightly plausible paradox.

    © Tim Grace, 21 January 2012

    To the reader: It doesn’t take much to create a fuss over a line of words. Retracting that string of thought is difficult; it gets snagged so easily. On a good day a contentious thought might be openly aired; on a bad day it becomes a most enticing deep-water bait. As it sinks a small school of fish nibbles its edges; but then, along comes a shark with far bigger intentions. Discretion being the better part of valour decrees the warranted loss of hook, line and sinker… one should never angle for a fight.

    To the poet: This sonnet did follow an argument over the previous sonnet regarding silos. Why two people would choose to angrily debate the virtues of a silo I don’t know. Nonetheless, it spawned a good piece of purgative poetry. The poem has some satisfying sub-elements that I enjoyed merging into its deeper layers of construction; for later in depth analysis.

     

    angling Angling
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  • Reason’s Reference

    Reason’s Reference

    For millennia we have scribed our thoughts;
    put pen to paper and as such preserved
    all manner of inspiration… all sorts
    of wonder. So conscripted, we’ve conserved
    in good faith the font of reason’s reference.
    Forever more attached, writ and listed:
    sentenced, word-by-word, the very essence
    of a flourish: styled but never twisted.
    Written as to permeate our culture,
    bold-stroked messages indelibly inked
    to imitate form, or shape a future
    world; built upon words, most beautifully linked.
    . It’s the cursive script of pen or quill,
    . that reveals the hand of a writer’s will.

    Tim Grace, 14 December 2011

    To the reader: I was wondering… were the Egyptians able to turn a poetic phrase in hieroglyphic form? In search of an answer, I stumbled on the ‘Lettrist Movement’ led by Isidore Isou; post the second world war. Lettrism’s Manifesto rallied against the atomised letter and the destructive power of the word. Far from enabling freedom of thought, lettrists perceived letters and words as insidious links in a constricting chain; manipulated by the literati. According to Lettrism, the hieroglyph does less damage in transporting and translating an experience across a thoughtful medium such as poetry. I’m still wondering…

    To the poet: Letterism aside, preservation of a word-based poem requires a script that will authentically transport a message through time and space; so that some time later… the distant reader can retrieve their own uniquely crafted assembly of ideas. In scripting a poem, the skill is in the crafted management of its future impact on the reader. Used too functionally, too literally, the script can lack fertile nuance and starve the text of ambiguous translation; for at the heart of reading and writing poetry is creative interpretation.

     

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    reason’s reference

     

  • Motive Bound

    Motive Bound

    The mathematician talks of flocking:
    the collective assemblage of like forms;
    to do with central tendencies, stocking
    efficiencies (see the way the bee swarms).
    It’s all about clustering formations,
    and the non-random shape of a system.
    It’s all about patterns and representations,
    and how nature does its best to twist them
    into combinations of advantage.
    The V-shape of Canadian geese,
    the shuffling of penguins, edge-to-edge;
    best use of energy and fuel’s release.
    . It’s through use …  a solution’s shape is found.
    . Nature’s cleverness is to motive bound.

    Copyright, Tim Grace, 6 December 2011

    To the reader: Patterns form to establish efficient relationships. A functional pattern of behaviour will serve some purpose and deliver some benefit. It will be useful and convenient; at best, powerful and protective. Geese do the power-flock to conserve individual energy in flight. Penguins perform the protective-flock as they shuffle to insulate the pack from cold. The interesting thing about flocking is that it’s a collective intelligence constructed through the system for individual benefit. Belonging is a self-serving commitment to and for the common good.

    To the poet: Playing with a natural phenomenon is an interesting poetic exercise. Usually, the idea will be sparked by a snippet of science that reveals a curious insight. A little research is essential and useful in delivering a glossary of terms. As with the ‘flocking’ theme, it’s often the case that the idea will have already gained public interest and momentum as a talking point. A poet’s work is to play with ideas, to express them creatively; in memorable shape and form.

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  • Common Threads

    Common Threads

    I collect nuts and bolts by the roadside,
    it’s an odd assortment of random finds.
    Some are obvious and easily spied:
    they are those that shine before the rust binds
    itself to their surface. New to the road
    they have not nestled into hidden nooks,
    nor taken the hit of a heavy load,
    they retain the shape of their fresh made looks;
    in every sense new to my collection.
    As alluvial pickings they hold
    the shimmer and shine of self-selection;
    unweathered, yet to have their history told.
    . So, what of this collection can be said?
    . Nothing more true… than its a common thread.

    Tim Grace, 29 November 2011

    To the reader: Late 2011, I was seeking more from work than work could offer. Tedium was broken with a break for lunch that included a walk around the neighbouring streets. Always the tinkerer, I have an eye for nuts and bolts and this led to a surprisingly large, and quickly accrued, collection of threaded metal. An odd amusement but easily construed as metaphor: the world unwinds as road spill.

    To the poet: Hardly a great poem, but then again, it actually describes a very real and raw time in my working career; when the most stimulating part of the day was a lunchtime walk. Each piece of road-spill is a poem in itself. The shiny collectables are obvious and attractive, but as in this poem it’s through them we describe the true character of a common thread; toughened steel.

     

    common threads common threads

     

  • Peace Extols

    Peace Extols

    Most days come and go, not so with this one.
    This one lingers somewhat longer than most.
    This one reminds us of the good we’ve done.
    Of this ‘one day’ we neither brag nor boast.
    There’s a sombreness about this ‘one day’.
    It’s the ‘one day’ of all days when we pause
    to acknowledge the fallen and to pray
    that in their memory we recognise the cause
    that gave them their reason to sacrifice,
    so selflessly, their gold and silver themes;
    and then to give, regardless of the price,
    a new set of hopes, a new set of dreams.
    . Let this ‘one day’ bring comfort to their souls,
    . for they have earned the rest that peace extols.

    © Tim Grace, 11 November 2011

    To the reader: Sombre and respectful, as they are, collective commemorations are reassuring; an inter-generational confirmation of commitment to each others’ national interests. Often sprinkled through the calendar that ‘one day’ is loaded with patriotic symbolism. That ‘one day’ bares the burden of testimony. We are reminded of heroic deeds of self-sacrifice and strength of character; drawn to action in the face of unimaginable fear. Those that died on our behalf … we will remember them; they died in war, they rest in peace.

    To the poet: The current of a flowing river is to some extent just a mathematical calculation. Given no reason to do otherwise, a river that follows its direction without resistance or impedance will behave predictably; without much character. This sonnet begins like that… four steady sentences to begin with. But then, the river of words begin to flow. The next eight lines blend to form a single ribbon of sense – punctuated to give it an uneasy rippling; an agitation that finds stoic resolution; at end, the reassurance of peace.

     

    peace extols peace extols